Silver MBA Personal Statement Editing Package

MBA personal statements are crucial to your success. More than the numbers—your college grades and GMAT scores—the statements you submit with your application are of extreme significance. MBA admissions officers use these essays to determine whether you are sufficiently prepared and committed to enroll in their program and to excel. Grant this portion of your application the attention it needs in order to increase your chances of admission to the MBA programs of your choice.

Work with Sibia to rise above other MBA applicants. Sibia's Silver MBA Personal Statement Editing Package helps you to craft statements that persuasively demonstrate that you are an ideal candidate for business school. Your personal consultant will make sure you frame your experiences and qualifications in a manner that thoroughly impresses MBA admissions officers.

What You Receive

• One comprehensive review of your draft personal statement(s), including feedback on content, structure, style, and grammar and a detailed summary at end of document
• A redline version showing all your editor's recommended changes and comments, along with a fully proofed, "clean" copy that incorporates these changes
• One week of email support following return of document(s)
• Option of standard (48 hours) or expedited (24 hours) delivery

Submit Your Draft(s)

Place an order and upload your personal statement(s).  Submit as many statements as you wish, within the word count you have purchased. 

MBA Personal Statement
Editing and Consulting

You will receive confirmation that your personal statement(s) have been received. A Sibia consultant who specializes in MBA admissions will thoroughly critique, edit and proofread your essay(s) and improve their structure, flow and grammar. She will untangle any awkward phrases and return your personal statement(s) by the method you requested: via email or secure download to your account.

Your Essay Is Delivered

For each essay you submit, you will receive a redline version which shows you exactly what your editor recommended to adjust, add or strike out. A detailed summary at the end of the redline version will provide an in-depth overview of the strengths and weaknesses of your MBA essay. In addition, you will receive a fully proofed "clean" copy of each personal statement that has already incorporated our recommended changes. Further, you will have an additional 7 days of email support to ask questions of your editor consultant.