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Gold MBA Personal Statement Planning Package

Thoroughly improve your personal statement with the input of an MBA Admissions consultant.

Write and rewrite to present stellar MBA personal statements. The essays you are required to complete when you submit an MBA application are designed to reveal significant features about yourself: how you respond to pressure, what your long-term and short-term goals are, how you handled your undergraduate experience, etc. You must ensure you give admissions officers a stunningly positive first impression of your candidacy to business school.

Benefit from your personal consultant to get the most insightful feedback. Including the services offered under the Silver Package, this Gold MBA Personal Statement Planning Package enables you to contact your personal MBA admissions consultant more freely. Not only do you receive customized admissions advice, but you can also have multiple drafts of your personal statements edited and proofread.

What You Receive

  • Two separate comprehensive reviews of personal statement draft(s), including input on structure, content, style and grammar and a detailed summary overview
  • Following each review, a redline version presenting your editor's recommended changes and comments, along with a fully proofed "clean" copy that incorporates these changes
  • Unlimited email support following each comprehensive review
  • A third review provides a thorough proofreading and polish and an additional week of email support.
  • Option of standard (48 hours) or expedited (24 hours) delivery for each review

Details / Timeline

Submit Your Draft(s)

Place an order and upload your personal statement(s). Submit as many essays as you wish, within the word count you have chosen

MBA Personal Statement
 Editing and Consulting

You will receive confirmation that your personal statement(s) have been received. A Sibia MBA admissions consultant will thoroughly critique, edit and proofread your essay(s) and improve their structure, flow and grammar.   She will untangle any awkward phrases and return your personal statement(s) by the method you requested: via email or secure download to your account within 48 or 24 hours.

Detailed Critique                                                           Invaluable Input 

For each essay you submit, you will receive a redline version which shows you exactly what your editor recommended to adjust, add or strike out. A detailed summary at the end of the redline version will provide an in-depth overview of the strengths and weaknesses of your MBA essay(s). In addition, you will receive a fully proofed "clean" copy of each personal statement that has already incorporated our recommended changes.

Review, Re-edit and Re-Submit

After carefully reviewing your MBA consultant's recommended changes, make appropriate changes and feel free to email your consultant if you have any questions. Once you've revised your personal statement(s), re-submit them to your editor for another thorough critique, editing and proofreading session. She'll return your MBA essay(s) back again within 48 or 24 hours, as you had originally selected.

Final Proofread and Polish                                         Additional Email Support

For this last stage, make additional changes, ask any further questions of your consultant and then submit your MBA personal statement(s) a third time for a final Proofread and Polish. Your consultant will perfect your essay(s) and return final redline and clean copies within 48 or 24 hours. You'll receive an additional 7 days of email support to ask any questions of your consultant.


Select from two delivery options: each essay is reviewed and returned in 48 hours with Standard Delivery, or in 24 hours with Accelerated Delivery.

Word Count Standard Price Accelerated Price
0-250 $240 $312
251-500 $265 $342
501-750 $290 $375
751 - 1000 $315 $408
1001 - 1500 $360 $465
1501 - 2000 $405 $524
2001 - 2500 $450 $582
2501 - 3000 $495 $640
3001 - 4000 $540 $702
4000+ Contact us for a quote

Our Guarantee

Sibia's Gold MBA Personal Statement Planning service is optimal for applicants seeking in-depth guidance while crafting their personal statements. Rest assured that you are optimizing your chances of admission by working with an experienced Sibia consultant. We guarantee your satisfaction with our service, and should you encounter any issues, you can contact us for immediate resolution. If you remain dissatisfied, we'll provide you a full refund or, alternatively, free credit to apply toward another Sibia service. Get in touch with us today to begin moving closer to acceptance at your top choice MBA program!

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"Dona did a great job editing my personal statement. I am also very pleased with the advice she gave and comments she made. Thank you very much!

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